Saturday, February 18, 2012

Featured Author: Abraham (click here)

All of my students know I am a HUGE Texas Rangers fan!  I made a personal connection to this story because I can relate to the anxiety and frustration Abraham felt. This story is Abraham's experience with his father watching the heartbreaking game 6 of the World Series. 

To improve Abraham's writing in the future, we learned to organize his ideas into paragraphs.






Please comment below and let him know what you think about his story!

Comment as "Name/URL"
Students - use your first name only, leave URL blank and press publish.

21 comments:

  1. The part were you stated WE WERE ON THE EDGE OF OUR SEATS.SPECTACULAR.ONCHOR.ONCHOR.

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  2. I love your rangers story

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  3. Kristin (Mr. Adams' Wife)February 18, 2012 at 7:20 PM

    I watched that game too, and I remember how frustrating it was! I'm glad you are your dad have something special to share together.

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  4. The second I laid my eyes on your story i got sucked in as if their was a vacuum on my head. SO AMAZING!!! Keep up the good work.

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  5. I enjoyed reading your story. Your Ranger story made me feel like I was at the game sitting next to you. I liked the way you described the game.

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  6. Your interduction was awesome!The part when you siad me and my dad drink alot of energy drinks to stay awake was funny.

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  7. Your conclusion was very meaningful, and your passion for baseball really showed in the story.

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  8. I liked your story,it made me feel like if i was in the game with you.

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  9. I liked your ending loved your story

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  10. I loved the heart of your story!!!!!

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  11. I like when you said let's play ball! I like your spelling.

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  12. Great Interduction,and Fabulous Handwriting!!!!!!!I love How You EXCLAIMED In Your Story Play Ball

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  13. I liked how your story kept me excited, I too remember all those feeling while I watch the game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  14. Thank you Mr.Adams for posting my story.Can you post another story.

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  15. I loved your introduction.Keep on the good writing

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  16. i love how you shouted LETS PLAY BALL!

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  17. very cool dialogue and awesome explaining.

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  18. I love your story!!!!!!!!!

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  19. Your middle was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  20. I loved the part were you yelld what just happen

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  21. i love your rangers story

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Students - use your first name only and leave URL blank
Press publish.

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