tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post2274297605218547165..comments2023-04-02T04:13:56.086-05:00Comments on <center> Mr. Adams Writing Class </center>: Featured Author: Abraham (click here)Mr. Jeff Adamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14171759070904273584noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-8399356929534841102012-03-26T11:09:34.249-05:002012-03-26T11:09:34.249-05:00i love your rangers storyi love your rangers storytevinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-12884669469649261132012-03-26T11:04:52.229-05:002012-03-26T11:04:52.229-05:00I loved the part were you yelld what just happenI loved the part were you yelld what just happenAdam inoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-50368282555961276872012-03-06T10:22:00.611-06:002012-03-06T10:22:00.611-06:00Your middle was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...Your middle was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Aleeyarnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-44493983844948290302012-03-02T09:17:03.353-06:002012-03-02T09:17:03.353-06:00I love your story!!!!!!!!!I love your story!!!!!!!!!Diananoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-67641122291497158872012-03-01T14:58:48.675-06:002012-03-01T14:58:48.675-06:00very cool dialogue and awesome explaining.very cool dialogue and awesome explaining.Andrenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-35011910978525238032012-03-01T14:49:54.942-06:002012-03-01T14:49:54.942-06:00i love how you shouted LETS PLAY BALL!i love how you shouted LETS PLAY BALL!hunternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-86512251195720877992012-02-29T14:40:05.637-06:002012-02-29T14:40:05.637-06:00I loved your introduction.Keep on the good writing...I loved your introduction.Keep on the good writingtristannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-57026807946763251462012-02-27T14:37:37.901-06:002012-02-27T14:37:37.901-06:00Thank you Mr.Adams for posting my story.Can you po...Thank you Mr.Adams for posting my story.Can you post another story.abrahamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-20863458444160483652012-02-24T19:18:27.313-06:002012-02-24T19:18:27.313-06:00I liked how your story kept me excited, I too reme...I liked how your story kept me excited, I too remember all those feeling while I watch the game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Tristannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-40140264001411026532012-02-23T15:00:06.360-06:002012-02-23T15:00:06.360-06:00Great Interduction,and Fabulous Handwriting!!!!!!!...Great Interduction,and Fabulous Handwriting!!!!!!!I love How You EXCLAIMED In Your Story Play BallMaxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-76336385846588196282012-02-23T11:18:21.722-06:002012-02-23T11:18:21.722-06:00I like when you said let's play ball! I li...I like when you said let's play ball! I like your spelling.Angelnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-22197514688887954572012-02-23T09:13:20.882-06:002012-02-23T09:13:20.882-06:00I loved the heart of your story!!!!!I loved the heart of your story!!!!!salmanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-7177045373082256232012-02-21T16:06:58.176-06:002012-02-21T16:06:58.176-06:00I liked your ending loved your storyI liked your ending loved your storyNatalienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-92058157783317916102012-02-19T19:53:58.767-06:002012-02-19T19:53:58.767-06:00I liked your story,it made me feel like if i was i...I liked your story,it made me feel like if i was in the game with you.sandranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-36648226521937995522012-02-19T12:08:14.755-06:002012-02-19T12:08:14.755-06:00Your conclusion was very meaningful, and your pass...Your conclusion was very meaningful, and your passion for baseball really showed in the story.Lilynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-46826050855476523482012-02-18T22:34:18.920-06:002012-02-18T22:34:18.920-06:00Your interduction was awesome!The part when you si...Your interduction was awesome!The part when you siad me and my dad drink alot of energy drinks to stay awake was funny.sonatanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-71878930832108729092012-02-18T22:29:22.958-06:002012-02-18T22:29:22.958-06:00I enjoyed reading your story. Your Ranger story ma...I enjoyed reading your story. Your Ranger story made me feel like I was at the game sitting next to you. I liked the way you described the game.Mrs. Kelleynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-85827295638064192192012-02-18T22:12:56.256-06:002012-02-18T22:12:56.256-06:00The second I laid my eyes on your story i got suck...The second I laid my eyes on your story i got sucked in as if their was a vacuum on my head. SO AMAZING!!! Keep up the good work.joelnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-35483530287538144132012-02-18T19:20:41.410-06:002012-02-18T19:20:41.410-06:00I watched that game too, and I remember how frustr...I watched that game too, and I remember how frustrating it was! I'm glad you are your dad have something special to share together.Kristin (Mr. Adams' Wife)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-68796960937982412212012-02-18T16:51:37.897-06:002012-02-18T16:51:37.897-06:00I love your rangers storyI love your rangers storyIvannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37175494355718972.post-80618657933258465822012-02-18T14:37:42.670-06:002012-02-18T14:37:42.670-06:00The part were you stated WE WERE ON THE EDGE OF OU...The part were you stated WE WERE ON THE EDGE OF OUR SEATS.SPECTACULAR.ONCHOR.ONCHOR.Javiernoreply@blogger.com