Monday, March 26, 2012

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  1. AleeyarMarch 26, 2012 at 9:32 AM

    I like when you say beep beep beep!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. APRIL!March 26, 2012 at 9:36 AM

    i like how your story starts with sound efects

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  3. DarnellMarch 26, 2012 at 9:37 AM

    I love how you put beep beep beep in your story

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  4. nicholasMarch 26, 2012 at 10:35 AM

    Joey i can toalaly relate to going schliterban.

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  5. JOHNATHANMarch 26, 2012 at 11:11 AM

    I Like how you put your period

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  6. AbrahamMarch 26, 2012 at 1:46 PM

    I like the twist at the end.

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  7. JoelMarch 26, 2012 at 1:49 PM

    THANK YOU ALL FOR THE SUPPORT!!!

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  8. Ryan R.March 26, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    I can relate to your story Joey ,and is schliterbahn a waterpark?

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  9. jenniferMarch 26, 2012 at 1:56 PM

    you are really great on sound effects.

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  10. AnelMarch 29, 2012 at 8:52 AM

    I liked how you used sound effects

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  11. Adam IMarch 29, 2012 at 10:36 AM

    I loved how you used i zoomed my way to the bathroom and the part were you bolted to the van and your sound effects they were awesome!!!

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  12. sandraApril 3, 2012 at 8:52 AM

    I liked how you started with dialogue. I also liked your show not tell!!!

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  13. michelleFebruary 18, 2013 at 10:41 AM

    Loved your story because i am kind of scared to go on fast rides.

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  14. PaytonFebruary 18, 2013 at 1:41 PM

    I loved your dialogue.

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  15. AshantiFebruary 18, 2013 at 4:13 PM

    i love your soundefects, and now i want to go to schliterbahn!!! I also like how u showed and diddent tell c: C: C: C: C:

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  16. KADENCEFebruary 18, 2013 at 4:53 PM

    I LOVE YOUR STORY IT IS SO DESCRIPTIVE! AND I LOVE HOW YOU USED SOUND EFFECTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  17. kadenceFebruary 19, 2013 at 1:25 PM

    awsome keep rollin like a rock star. i just cant get over how awsome it was.

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  18. TrevonneFebruary 19, 2013 at 6:37 PM

    I like the punctuation and I like the way you described your story.

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  19. Sienna H.February 20, 2013 at 7:10 PM

    I am speechless it was such an amazing story!! You made me feel like I was there!!! I cant wait to read your other stories Lily!! Make some more like that and you'll be rocking and rolling like a rock star!!

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  20. MakaylaFebruary 21, 2013 at 9:19 AM

    I like yore dilog becus it rile mad me fill tate i"m in yore store now!!

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  21. MARQUES .JFebruary 21, 2013 at 10:23 AM

    I liked The part where your alarm clock rang in the morning and your uncle yelled get up"

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  22. HailieFebruary 21, 2013 at 1:20 PM

    You have a great story! This is the one of he best stories I have ever read. I love your sound effects at the beginning and how you described how your uncle was shaking you.I also liked how you said he was screaming like a banshee.

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  23. AdiaFebruary 28, 2013 at 5:46 PM

    I liked how you used sound effects in your story.

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  24. michaelMarch 21, 2013 at 2:20 PM

    I love where you yelled whoo hoo funny

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