It was funny when the fish was dragging you in the middle of the lake and when your dad saved you.Your heart was very meaningful and your story got me glued.GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i love your hart
ReplyDeleteI love the conclusion and the part when you got drag but not ina bad way but in a funny way.
ReplyDeleteI love how you used SPLASH!!! when the fish dragged you.
ReplyDeleteIt was funny when the fish was dragging you in the middle of the lake and when your dad saved you.Your heart was very meaningful and your story got me glued.GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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