Friday, February 22, 2013

Featured Author: Bella (click here)

Our second featured author this year is Bella.  She is in a fourth grade and her sister, Brenen, is in third grade. You will soon see that wonderful writing runs in their family. 

(You can read Brenen's story below, or you can click here)

Their mother works at a local college.  She challenged her daughters with the same writing prompt she gave her college students.  As you can see below, Bella did an excellent job explaining her life goals in her expository paper.




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25 comments:

  1. JulietteFebruary 22, 2013 at 10:50 PM

    I hope you achieve your goals

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  2. Anna C.February 23, 2013 at 8:19 AM

    I love how you described what you meant by the goals you listed!!

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  3. AshlynnFebruary 23, 2013 at 10:12 AM

    Oh my god! I love your story so much that I cried a little. You really help me set my future goals and it was very meaningful. Thank you!

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  4. Mr. AdamsFebruary 23, 2013 at 10:20 AM

    Bella,

    I am very impressed by your goals! I know that if you work hard you will achieve them. My favorite part was when you told us, "I will make these goals a reality by teaching my kids all the wisdom my parents taught me." Wow!

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  5. kadenceFebruary 23, 2013 at 7:15 PM

    I love how you got so much effort to do this. you helped me set my goal thank you so much. you inspired me!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. julianFebruary 24, 2013 at 12:22 PM

    I read Alice"s in wonderland.I hope you get your doll.

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    1. BellaFebruary 26, 2013 at 5:28 PM

      Thank you for your wonderful comments.I'm glad I helped you you guys with your goals.I hope you guys achieve your goals.

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    2. TamiiaMarch 1, 2013 at 3:42 PM

      Rock it girl!!!!!!!you are rokin & rollin girl.

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  7. TamiiaMarch 1, 2013 at 3:39 PM

    Girl you better rock!!!!!!!!!keep it goin girl

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  8. michaelMarch 5, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    I like the way you used fantastic and not a dead word thank you keep roking

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  9. erikMarch 5, 2013 at 2:40 PM

    I liked when you used dialogue in your story and it was a greatest story

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  10. semajMarch 5, 2013 at 2:43 PM

    I love how you said you would like to make your goals come true!!! and it insired me!!!

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  11. michaelMarch 5, 2013 at 2:47 PM

    And thank you for that wonderful story

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  12. semajMarch 6, 2013 at 2:24 PM

    I thank you for sharing that wonderful story!!!! once again ti inspired me!!

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  13. semajMarch 6, 2013 at 2:26 PM

    YPU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!

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  14. AnonymousMarch 14, 2013 at 1:09 AM

    I enjoyed reading about your goals. Is there a certain kind of doll you're working to earn?

    I was very interested in the comments you made about setting goals and working hard to accomplish them. I'm reading a book called Mindset that examines the topic of achieving goals. Your observations remind me of some of the ideas I've read in my book.

    Miss Noonan

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  15. Hailie S.March 22, 2013 at 1:35 PM

    I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE your story so much! It just has all the steps mr.Adams taught us and you did all of those steps perfectly

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  16. mosesMarch 22, 2013 at 1:35 PM

    Hope you do those goals in life

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  17. TrevonneMarch 24, 2013 at 4:57 PM

    I like the way you explained your life gaols!!!:-)

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  18. caitlinApril 25, 2013 at 1:38 PM

    Hey Bella
    i love your story.
    bye-bye

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  19. SiennaMay 2, 2013 at 1:15 PM

    Hey Bella I love your story! Keep rockin and rollin and youll a rock star!!

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  20. ToriMay 29, 2013 at 6:44 PM

    I loved youre story it was meaningfull

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  21. AnonymousOctober 28, 2013 at 10:28 PM

    I love your peew paragraph Bella I wish I could see you personally I would really like to see more stories of your life.What would really like to see more of is your family. Because that 2nd paragraph really inspired me. From Angel Willard.

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  22. cassandra is cassandra no one elseOctober 30, 2013 at 5:45 PM

    oh my god That was better than any book I've read and they are PUBLISHED!!!!!!!!!

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  23. MahmoudDecember 18, 2013 at 7:32 AM

    I wish I could type my stories. :[

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