Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Featured Author: Mercedes (click here)

Today our featured author is Mercedes.  She wrote about the old mysterious house that used to belong to Mr. Jenkins.  I wrote the first half of this spooky tale.  Despite all the warning signs, for some reason my students keep visiting this haunting place.  They all live to share their own unique scary tale.



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43 comments:

  1. BluMarch 6, 2013 at 8:14 AM

    I feel like i was in you story!

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  2. blancaMarch 6, 2013 at 8:34 AM

    I love how you did your story and how you put some action in it.Keep it up!

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  3. KatherineMarch 6, 2013 at 9:53 AM

    You wrote a great Mr.Jenkins story!!!!!!!!!!!
    The story really painted a picture in my mind :)

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    1. MahmoudMarch 7, 2013 at 6:26 PM

      Mine too.

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    2. TrevonneApril 27, 2013 at 12:13 PM

      Mine tooo !!!!!!!!!!

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    3. mercedes.hMay 17, 2013 at 6:47 PM

      mine tooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    4. KerryJanuary 17, 2014 at 10:29 AM

      So awesome! In my head, it felt like a dream!

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  4. basharMarch 6, 2013 at 2:45 PM

    what happend to derek ,is he dead ,did mr jenkins took his soi and ate him. what did mr.jenkies did to andrew and his brother

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  5. basharMarch 6, 2013 at 2:56 PM

    I LOVE YOUR MR.JENKENS STORY MERCEDES

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  6. SEMAJMarch 7, 2013 at 2:31 PM

    YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER I'VE KNOWN!!!!!!

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  7. TAMIIAMarch 7, 2013 at 2:37 PM

    MERCEDES YOU NEED TO KEEP ROCKIN CUZ YOU DOING TERRIFIC GIRL!!!!!

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  8. TAMIIAMarch 7, 2013 at 2:47 PM

    o.m.g I LOVED IT MATTER FACT
    IM STEAL LOVINGT IT RIGHT
    NOW

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  9. Anna C.March 7, 2013 at 6:16 PM

    That was so creepy! Keep writing!!

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  10. MahmoudMarch 7, 2013 at 6:25 PM

    I loved the part, when you told me, you pulled the last book, and you fell into his labrotory.

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  11. Grace C.March 9, 2013 at 4:37 PM

    Keep it up, Mercedes! I LOVED the part when children's whispers filled the room, Mr.Jenkins' ghost rose out of Derek's football, and Derek was never seen or heard from again... :)

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  12. STEPHANIEMarch 20, 2013 at 5:16 PM

    I liked the ending fo the story :)

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  13. 5 th grader AprilMarch 20, 2013 at 6:18 PM

    Love your story. Keep writing my fab part was the ending

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  14. Hailie SMarch 22, 2013 at 1:39 PM

    I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH.IT WAS VERY SPOOKY!!!!

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  15. mosesMarch 22, 2013 at 1:41 PM

    YOUR STORY WAS GOOD BECAUSE YOU SAID SOMETHING EVILLY AND THE PART ABOUT THE BOOK CASE PART

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  16. Miss NoonanMarch 24, 2013 at 11:48 AM

    I loved your verb choices -- crept, tiptoed, continued, dashed, and hightailed. Your story had a lot of great visual descriptions which allowed me to imagine the setting. It's obvious you put a lot of thought and effort into your story. Great job!

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  17. michaelMarch 25, 2013 at 2:08 PM

    I love how the way when you brougth mr.jenkens alive.

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  18. michaelMarch 25, 2013 at 2:11 PM

    I love when you used sound effects on your paper about MR.Jenkens.

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  19. Matt GApril 1, 2013 at 10:20 AM

    Keep it up man make part 2 part 2 part 2 part 2 what a GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD STORY

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    1. mercedes.hMay 17, 2013 at 6:47 PM

      I will probely make a part 2.

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  20. MERCEDES.HApril 13, 2013 at 3:25 PM

















































    THANKS!!!!!






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  21. Alex.HApril 13, 2013 at 3:28 PM

    keep up the good work!!!!!

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  22. Salma Guerrero un 5th gradeApril 15, 2013 at 8:44 PM

    I like how you had capital letters on words that needed action in it.. You're story was Amazing love the action.....!!!

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  23. cassandraApril 20, 2013 at 1:01 PM

    I felt like I was there your story gave me chills in a positive way thank you for inspiring some of my new stories :)

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  24. CaitlinApril 26, 2013 at 1:00 PM

    I love your dialong.

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  25. KerryMay 3, 2013 at 8:51 AM

    I loved your story! by the way it made my brother SCREAM!!! :)

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  26. KAEDYN P (aka, KP)May 3, 2013 at 4:33 PM

    O.M. G!!!!( AKA, OH MY GOSH!!!!) man, very awesome story, i read it to my guinea pig and it made her calmer. part two, like matt sai- I mean, REPLIED. :) :) :o :)

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  27. KAEDYN P (aka, KP)May 3, 2013 at 4:35 PM

    man, I think I'm gonna have nightmares tonight. you're a SUPER STAR!!!! B)

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  28. michelleMay 3, 2013 at 9:55 PM

    I relly like your movement.

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  29. ToriJune 7, 2013 at 10:49 PM

    Nice details !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWSOME.

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  30. ToriJune 7, 2013 at 10:50 PM

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!W!!!!!!!!!!@~!!!!!!!!!!!!@!

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  31. kadenceJune 10, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    i love this story and i loved the part about the secret compartment in the book case

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  32. michelleOctober 18, 2013 at 9:42 PM

    Love the story keep it up.

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  33. Sandra Brene in 6th gradeOctober 24, 2013 at 9:31 PM

    I loved your story!!! It really hooked me,I loved the part about the book being a secret compartment to Mr.jenkins labratory. Keep on writing!

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  34. MahmoudOctober 29, 2013 at 5:11 PM

    Your conclusion was...AMAZING!!!:)

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  35. AdiaNovember 22, 2013 at 5:08 PM

    your story is awesome!!

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  36. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2014 at 8:09 AM

    I love your story it was really good keep up the great work!
    I like the endding :3

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  37. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2014 at 8:14 AM

    Sorry I put my self anonymous it was my mistake, but my name is Alex.R now in 6th grade.I loved your story sooooooooo much.
    Keep tight Mr.Adams ;3

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  38. GraceFebruary 19, 2014 at 3:23 PM

    I loved your story because it was very descriptive. :B

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