Monday, March 26, 2012

Featured Author: Andre (click here)



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  1. AleeyarMarch 26, 2012 at 9:26 AM

    Your ending was really awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. aprilMarch 26, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    i like how you told me what he gave you to wear and i liked how you told me you were going to anthor contry

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  3. oscarMarch 26, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    I loved your story !!!!

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  4. Ryan P.March 26, 2012 at 10:21 AM

    Andre i loved your story in your hand writing.Your writing it was amazing.I loved when you said.I really enjoyed remembering us laughing

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  5. abrahamMarch 26, 2012 at 1:50 PM

    I like your handwriting.

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  6. joelMarch 26, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    I like how you you used more dialouge than most people. What's a story without dialouge!

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  7. sonataMarch 26, 2012 at 2:02 PM

    Your handwriting is magnifcent!

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  8. jenniferMarch 26, 2012 at 2:17 PM

    Nice conclusion!

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  9. AnelApril 3, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    I loved how you used a lot of supporting details like when you said you got there from a airplane.

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  10. sandraApril 3, 2012 at 8:57 AM

    I liked your conclusion. I also liked when you said you can't wait to go back.

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  11. AlexandraApril 5, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    WOW!!!I like when you told me your amoshions.When you said fluffy i felt the fluffyness.

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  12. DarnellApril 5, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    nice story. that was the bast story that I ever read

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    1. CLAUDIAFebruary 18, 2013 at 4:07 PM

      I liked your story and i liked your amoshions.I also likeed your conclusion

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  13. JamyrienFebruary 18, 2013 at 8:25 PM

    I like the ways you restated the idea of the story.

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  14. Max BFebruary 19, 2013 at 10:52 AM

    Me and my brother, Jack also laugh when one of us messes up so I can relate to this story.

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  15. MakaylaFebruary 21, 2013 at 9:10 AM

    I like how you thot how are you and yore brother going to do wine you are 7 and he is 31!!!

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  16. KatherineFebruary 21, 2013 at 10:20 AM

    I really like your conclusion!!!!

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