Sunday, March 25, 2012

Featured Author: Sarah (click here)



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11 comments:

  1. LilyMarch 26, 2012 at 2:04 PM

    Wonderful story Sarah.It was very descriptive especially in the introduction.

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  2. *kailey*March 26, 2012 at 2:19 PM

    I just adore the way you discribed the honeysuckles.awsome!!!

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  3. dejaMarch 29, 2012 at 8:52 AM

    terrific interdouction

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  4. sonataMarch 30, 2012 at 1:52 PM

    Sarah you are awesome at describing things in your story!Also i love the way your handwriting!

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  5. sonataApril 1, 2012 at 11:45 AM

    I lke how you described how summer was it was glorious!

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  6. TaylorApril 3, 2012 at 8:29 AM

    I love your story i love how you said now days you and Anna play at the park all the time.I love your outstanding word choice and punctuation and vary nice handwriting your story was fantastic.

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  7. equirraApril 3, 2012 at 10:16 AM

    i love your story because your handwriting,your punctuation,your introduction,and your conclusion.

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  8. Timmia:)April 3, 2012 at 10:18 AM

    I love your story,i especially love your handwriting,and i love how you used show not tell,i love how you described how you liked summer because its so beautiful,and glorious!!!.I love how you described everything in your story like your were so excited,and your brother sounds so excited:)

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  9. IzabellaFebruary 18, 2013 at 1:34 PM

    I really like your story. I love that you made a new friend. ( I like honeysuckles to.)

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  10. Anna C.February 18, 2013 at 6:18 PM

    I love your story to the end of the earth!! Making new friends is WONDERFUL!!

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  11. cassandraFebruary 21, 2013 at 9:20 AM

    I love your story so much. the way you described everything made me feel like i was there.Your word choice made me feel like i was there with you.My favorite part is when you got shot with the Nerf gun.your story was AMAZINGLY AWESOME its always cool to make new friends.

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