WOW!!!Your handwriting was neat.The question in the beginning was AWESOME.I love your conclusion,and when you said even though when you freeze to death,you still will have a fantastic time playing.
I like how you started your intro with a question and your handwriting was beautiful.When you started your into with a question it really grab my attension and made me want to read more about your story.
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YOUR conclusion WAS amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteWOW!!!Your handwriting was neat.The question in the beginning was AWESOME.I love your conclusion,and when you said even though when you freeze to death,you still will have a fantastic time playing.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THE WAY YOU SAID THAT YOU AND YOUR COUSIN ALWAYS WIN.
ReplyDeleteI like how you started your intro with a question and your handwriting was beautiful.When you started your into with a question it really grab my attension and made me want to read more about your story.
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