Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Featured Author: Mercedes (click here)

Today our featured author is Mercedes.  She wrote about the old mysterious house that used to belong to Mr. Jenkins.  I wrote the first half of this spooky tale.  Despite all the warning signs, for some reason my students keep visiting this haunting place.  They all live to share their own unique scary tale.



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44 comments:

  1. I feel like i was in you story!

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  2. I love how you did your story and how you put some action in it.Keep it up!

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  3. You wrote a great Mr.Jenkins story!!!!!!!!!!!
    The story really painted a picture in my mind :)

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    1. Mine tooo !!!!!!!!!!

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    2. mine tooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    3. So awesome! In my head, it felt like a dream!

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  4. what happend to derek ,is he dead ,did mr jenkins took his soi and ate him. what did mr.jenkies did to andrew and his brother

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  5. I LOVE YOUR MR.JENKENS STORY MERCEDES

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  6. YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER I'VE KNOWN!!!!!!

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  7. MERCEDES YOU NEED TO KEEP ROCKIN CUZ YOU DOING TERRIFIC GIRL!!!!!

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  8. o.m.g I LOVED IT MATTER FACT
    IM STEAL LOVINGT IT RIGHT
    NOW

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  9. That was so creepy! Keep writing!!

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  10. I loved the part, when you told me, you pulled the last book, and you fell into his labrotory.

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  11. Keep it up, Mercedes! I LOVED the part when children's whispers filled the room, Mr.Jenkins' ghost rose out of Derek's football, and Derek was never seen or heard from again... :)

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  12. I liked the ending fo the story :)

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  13. 5 th grader AprilMarch 20, 2013 at 6:18 PM

    Love your story. Keep writing my fab part was the ending

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  14. I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH.IT WAS VERY SPOOKY!!!!

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  15. YOUR STORY WAS GOOD BECAUSE YOU SAID SOMETHING EVILLY AND THE PART ABOUT THE BOOK CASE PART

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  16. I loved your verb choices -- crept, tiptoed, continued, dashed, and hightailed. Your story had a lot of great visual descriptions which allowed me to imagine the setting. It's obvious you put a lot of thought and effort into your story. Great job!

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  17. I love how the way when you brougth mr.jenkens alive.

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  18. I love when you used sound effects on your paper about MR.Jenkens.

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  19. Keep it up man make part 2 part 2 part 2 part 2 what a GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD STORY

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    1. I will probely make a part 2.

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  20. keep up the good work!!!!!

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  21. Salma Guerrero un 5th gradeApril 15, 2013 at 8:44 PM

    I like how you had capital letters on words that needed action in it.. You're story was Amazing love the action.....!!!

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  22. I felt like I was there your story gave me chills in a positive way thank you for inspiring some of my new stories :)

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  23. I love your dialong.

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  24. I loved your story! by the way it made my brother SCREAM!!! :)

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  25. KAEDYN P (aka, KP)May 3, 2013 at 4:33 PM

    O.M. G!!!!( AKA, OH MY GOSH!!!!) man, very awesome story, i read it to my guinea pig and it made her calmer. part two, like matt sai- I mean, REPLIED. :) :) :o :)

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  26. KAEDYN P (aka, KP)May 3, 2013 at 4:35 PM

    man, I think I'm gonna have nightmares tonight. you're a SUPER STAR!!!! B)

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  27. I relly like your movement.

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  28. Nice details !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWSOME.

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  29. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!W!!!!!!!!!!@~!!!!!!!!!!!!@!

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  30. i love this story and i loved the part about the secret compartment in the book case

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  31. Love the story keep it up.

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  32. Sandra Brene in 6th gradeOctober 24, 2013 at 9:31 PM

    I loved your story!!! It really hooked me,I loved the part about the book being a secret compartment to Mr.jenkins labratory. Keep on writing!

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  33. Your conclusion was...AMAZING!!!:)

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  34. your story is awesome!!

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  35. I love your story it was really good keep up the great work!
    I like the endding :3

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  36. Sorry I put my self anonymous it was my mistake, but my name is Alex.R now in 6th grade.I loved your story sooooooooo much.
    Keep tight Mr.Adams ;3

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  37. I loved your story because it was very descriptive. :B

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