Friday, February 22, 2013

Featured Author: Brenen (click here)

Good evening writers!

Our very first featured author this year is Brenen.  She is in third grade and has a sister in fourth grade.  As you can see, excellent writing runs in the family.

(You can read her sister's story by clicking here)

Their mother works at a local college.  She challenged her daughters with the same writing prompt she gave her college students.  As you can see below, Brenen did a fantastic job explaining her life goals in this expository paper.




Please provide positive comments for our authors.

23 comments:

  1. Brenen,

    I am very impressed that you want to become a gemologist. That sounds like such an interesting job. I love how you explained all of your life goals and how you will reach them. Keep up all your hard work, and I know you will achieve your goals!

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  2. I hope you get to be a gemologist!!

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  3. I like how you used diologe in your paper.

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  4. I really like your story! Keep your hopes up for those things!

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  5. I love how you EXPLAINED the goals you wanted to accomplish!!

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  6. I hope you accomplish these goals. I like your dialogue don't dougt those goals I also like your story.

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  7. I liked how you explaied why you want to achive your goals.

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  8. Awesome just awesome, we kinda have a little in common because, I would like to be a librairian too. plus I hope you have a great live and keep does hopes up.

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  9. I really love your story.I hope you become a gemologist.

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  10. I like the way you uesd it is importent to have goals in life.

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  11. i hope you accompish your goels in life

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    1. Thank you,that means a lot to me.

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  12. Wow, I'm impressed Brenen!I loved those such disciptive words you used!instead of using JOB you used carrer! Very impressive I must say!

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  13. I hope you accomplish your goals !!!! You deserve to make them come true because you write awesome stories!!!!!!!!! Their is nothing bad to say,but lots to say that are awesome!!!!

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  14. Brenen,
    I enjoyed reading your writing. I`m intrigued by your interest in gems and rocks. Have you visited the new Perot Museum in Dallas? I had a chance to go there during Winter Break. It has an amazing collection of gems and the rocks they come from. It also has many interactive exhibits. In one area, I had the opportunity to experience what earthquakes of different intensities would feel like.

    Miss Noonan

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    1. I hope you and your sister both get masters deagreas.

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  15. i love that you put so much into your life.

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  16. Brenen,
    I enjoyed reading the story. I`m intrigued by your interest in gems and rocks. Have you visited the new Perot Museum in Dallas? I had a chance to go there during spring Break. It has an amazing collection of gems and the rocks they come from. It also has many interactive exhibits. In one area, I had the opportunity to experience what earthquakes of different intensities would feel like.nice job!

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  17. Sandra Brene in 6th gradeOctober 24, 2013 at 9:34 PM

    I really loved your story it was really detailed. I really hope you can accomplish those goals, keep on writing!

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  18. great job maybe you can make seven paragraphs instead of six paragraphs.

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  19. Hi I liked your story emotions your story is a m a z I n g

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  20. Brenen,
    I loved your story and how you organized it. I miss you very much and hope to read more of your stories!!

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