Monday, March 26, 2012

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  1. AnelMarch 26, 2012 at 9:39 AM

    I liked how you used supporting details

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  2. nicholasMarch 26, 2012 at 10:23 AM

    Matt i can realy relate to your story.

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    1. mattMarch 26, 2012 at 1:43 PM

      Thanks. Almost every body we know can relate to that.

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  3. FELICITYMarch 26, 2012 at 10:29 AM

    I LOVE WHEN YOU PLAYED WITH YOUR LITTLE SISTER.

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  4. JOHNATHAN BMarch 26, 2012 at 10:32 AM

    I LIKE HOW YOU USE YOUR CAPIALAZS YOUR LATTERS IN PUT YOUR PERIOD

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  5. JOHNATHAN BMarch 26, 2012 at 10:37 AM

    I LIKE HOW YOU USE YOUR PERIOD IN YOUR CAPIAL LATTERS

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  6. JOHNATHAN BMarch 26, 2012 at 10:41 AM

    I LIKE HOW YOU USE YOUR CAPIAL LATTERS IN YOUR PERIOD

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  7. tevinMarch 26, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    i love how you used germmer and you hooked me got my atction

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    1. mattMarch 26, 2012 at 1:52 PM

      It takes a lot to get someones attention these days.

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  8. JOHNATHAN BMarch 26, 2012 at 10:46 AM

    I LIKE HOW YOU USE YOUR PERIOD.

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  9. $Manuel$March 26, 2012 at 11:16 AM

    How is your sister matt

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    1. mattMarch 26, 2012 at 2:12 PM

      She's doing good. A simple bump is not going to keep my little sister down.

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  10. tinaMarch 26, 2012 at 1:33 PM

    i love the pucntion because i can read it and understand it.

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  11. AbrahamMarch 26, 2012 at 1:37 PM

    I like your heart because you are taking care of your sister.

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  12. JainaMarch 26, 2012 at 1:42 PM

    Matt i love you hart in your story. I say that because when you said' I love you to your sister it was sweet.

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  13. joelMarch 26, 2012 at 1:43 PM

    Just the thought of knowing you care about your sister is amazing. Some people ignore their brothers/sister and they never know what will happen next.

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  14. maxMarch 26, 2012 at 1:44 PM

    WHAT A MEANINGFULL STORY,AND YOUR STORY REALLY FLOWED WITH THE SUPPORTING DEATAILS.GREAT WORK!

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  15. sonataMarch 26, 2012 at 1:45 PM

    Your word choice was glorious!

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  16. adamMarch 26, 2012 at 1:51 PM

    it was great how you told about everything about that time!!!!!!!!!

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  17. jenniferMarch 26, 2012 at 1:51 PM

    It was so nice of you to play with your sister instead your PS3.

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  18. allyMarch 26, 2012 at 2:02 PM

    did it hurt your sister when they had to sew her up.

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  19. sarahMarch 26, 2012 at 2:42 PM

    I like the way you took YOUR time to play with your sister , that was nice . my brother is to busy playing his Xbox to play with me . ggggggrrrrrreeaattt !

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  20. AleeyarMarch 29, 2012 at 8:03 AM

    Matt your middle was so excite!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  21. NatalieMarch 29, 2012 at 8:04 AM

    I really like your ending

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  22. sandraMarch 29, 2012 at 9:12 AM

    I liked how you cared about your sister.I also like your ending too.

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  23. AndreMarch 29, 2012 at 2:05 PM

    your story was AWESOME.It was fun to read and your conclusion was very great and cool.

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  24. sonataApril 12, 2012 at 4:57 PM

    I also love the way you put it in paragraphs

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  25. KimiyaFebruary 8, 2013 at 4:42 PM

    Thats was so sad and happy. I can feel it was real. I can also picture it in my head

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  26. AshantiFebruary 18, 2013 at 3:51 PM

    I love your story i felt like i was realy in it.

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  27. Peyton KFebruary 18, 2013 at 6:55 PM

    I loved thew way you started in the middle of action(:

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  28. Peyton KFebruary 18, 2013 at 6:57 PM

    I COULD REALLY PICTURE YOUR STORY IN MY HEAD!!!

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  29. KatherineFebruary 19, 2013 at 7:29 PM

    That was sooo sad !!!!!! My knees were weak after that!!!!!!!!!! I hope your sisters O.K.:)

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  30. Peyton KFebruary 21, 2013 at 10:40 AM

    I loved your story. It was soooooo sad it made my legs numb.

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