Sunday, April 1, 2012

Featured Author: Javier (click here)


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  1. alissaMarch 26, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    I liked the way you wrote save some cookies for santa clause!!!!

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    1. JavierMarch 26, 2012 at 2:13 PM

      Thanks guys for the comments.

      Read my other story The Furios Bucking Bull.

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  2. APRIL!!March 26, 2012 at 9:39 AM

    i love how you started with the word YAY!

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  3. APRIL!!March 26, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    I LIKED HOW YOU SAID BEEEEEP INSTED OF SAYING IT SAID BEEP

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  4. abrahamMarch 26, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    I loved your sound affects

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  5. joelMarch 26, 2012 at 2:01 PM

    The begining of the story interested the reader because they noticed some excitement.

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  6. hunterMarch 26, 2012 at 2:05 PM

    i love how you said YAY! at the beginning.

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  7. sonataMarch 26, 2012 at 2:06 PM

    I kove your scence of humor in the story javier!

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  8. sandraMarch 29, 2012 at 9:17 AM

    I liked when you started with dialog at the beginning. I also liked your show not tell.

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  9. jennyApril 3, 2012 at 8:34 AM

    I love COOKIES >:D

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  10. DanielleApril 5, 2012 at 8:31 AM

    I love the way you said that you could not wait to make the cookies.

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  11. DianaApril 5, 2012 at 9:01 AM

    I like your word choice.

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  12. JulianFebruary 18, 2013 at 1:35 PM

    I like how you were ready to bake the cookies!!

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  13. BrendonFebruary 20, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    I like the baking cookies story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (P.S. love cookies)

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  14. SiennaFebruary 21, 2013 at 1:42 PM

    I like your descriptive words. I LOVE cookies!! I cant survive without them! I love how you used show not tell,and your dialogue at the beginning!Keep writing like that and you'll be a rock star!!!!

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