Sunday, April 1, 2012

Featured Author: Lily (click here)



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33 comments:

  1. YOUR WORD CHOICE WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. Your handwriting was awesome. I can see it really smooth...............

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  3. i love how you have spaces in your paper it makes it clear to read and i love your handwriting

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  4. loved how you talk about bulling is wronge *3*

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  5. wow! your a great writer i love how express things.About what you should do if you were bullied your a great writer love your story!

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  6. I couid relly relate to your stoy Lily.

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  7. I loved how you explained what to do if your being bullied.

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  8. I LIKE HOW YOU USE YOUR CAPIAL LATTERS AND PUNKUWAYTION

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  9. I like your story it was amazing

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  10. I like your word choice.

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  11. Great story Lily I would give it a 3 or a 3+.

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  12. I loved how you gave advice about what to do if you you are getting bullied.And and i love the way you told us how to stand up to yourself and tell the bully how you feel. :) :} :>

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  13. I enjoy how you realy sound eager to persuade people about bulling because it might let someone (maybe a bully) know how bad it is.

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  14. I love your factual information.It was facted packed!

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  15. You made me hooked to your story and every word.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  16. I loved your word choice

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  17. ilove your story lily it was great

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  18. I like how talk straight to the reader.

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  19. I like how you put your big words

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  20. You know what?That was the best story I have ever herd!!!!!!!!!!!!Also awesome handwriting.

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  21. I loved your handwriting it was so nice!!! I also liked the part you said that bullies are cowards.

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  22. I was so amazed when I read your story,,and I liked how you were talking about bullies you are so right......

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  23. I loved how you stand up to yourself and others. know I feel like I can do anything that I am to scared to do.

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  24. Lily you are an amaz story writer i was HOCKED i ashanti is proud to say i look up to u

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  25. Man it's awesome that you care about the people that are getting bullied. Your like a caring parent.

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  26. Great job, Lily! When I read the part when you wrote bullies are cowards, it really made me laugh! Really! It did!

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  27. I like how you tell people to not be scared and stand up for yourself it really wraps the story up and make it more meaningful for people to read.GREAT story!!!!!!

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  28. I love how you want people to stop bulling. you could really make a difference in the world. also the story felt alive like i was there.make sure you keep rolling like a rock star.it was great i loved it.

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  29. I like your authors voice!! That is nice you care about people getting bullied these days!!! AWSOME!!!!

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  30. I love how you care about people getting bullied !!! You chose a great topic !!! TERRIFIC !!!

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    1. Katherine i think you care about people when you say that.

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  31. I love your story about not bulling. love it.

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  32. I rely loved your word chioce. I can rely see your reading.

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