Sunday, April 1, 2012

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19 comments:

  1. Ryan P.March 26, 2012 at 1:08 PM

    Andre I like how you used punctuation and grammar and complete your sentence with periods and semicolons and colon Andre I like your title and ending

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  2. LuisMarch 26, 2012 at 1:38 PM

    I like your ending because you said that you love spending time with your familiy.

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  3. tristanMarch 26, 2012 at 1:45 PM

    I CAN Totally connect to your story about the huge water bucket.

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  4. abrahamMarch 26, 2012 at 2:01 PM

    Your story got my eyes glued to your story.

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  5. jenniferMarch 26, 2012 at 8:50 PM

    you used great word choice and i loved the way you sectioned the paragraphs.

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  6. sonataMarch 26, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    I like the way the way you section off the story into paragraghs.

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  7. adamMarch 29, 2012 at 2:04 PM

    I like how when you told about everything you probably did at the lodge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  8. MahmoudFebruary 18, 2013 at 4:59 PM

    Man i feel like i'm there. great word choice. p.s good job at the 2012-2013 spelling bee

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  9. Peyton KFebruary 18, 2013 at 6:40 PM

    I loved your story Andre it really entertained me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  10. Max BFebruary 19, 2013 at 10:32 AM

    This story was awesome because you described EVERYTHING you did at the lodge.You ALSO didn't leave us in the dust with the descriptions of the video game where you collect the clues.

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  11. MaylinFebruary 19, 2013 at 1:28 PM

    I like how you wrap up your ending it was meaningful and it hooked me I would love to read it again!!!!

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  12. KatherineFebruary 19, 2013 at 6:53 PM

    I loved it !!!!!!! I have been to Great Wolf Lodge ! That water bucket is so fun to be under!! Your a great writer I loved every thing!Keep up the AWESOME work!

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  13. RayyaFebruary 21, 2013 at 8:59 AM

    I really like how you talked about something you that you like to do,and you made it meaningful

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  14. MakaylaFebruary 21, 2013 at 9:26 AM

    I have been to Gerat Wolf Lodge and it is AWESOM. keep up the work!!

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  15. TrevonneFebruary 21, 2013 at 11:14 AM

    I like the way you explained what your favorite place was!!

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  16. caitlinFebruary 21, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    I agree with Trevonne !!

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  17. caitlinFebruary 21, 2013 at 3:43 PM

    Ihave never been to Great Wolf Lodge. But it sounds like real fun.

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  18. BrenenMarch 6, 2013 at 9:51 AM

    I love your concloshon.

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  19. TrevonneApril 27, 2013 at 12:10 PM

    I love your Introduction of your story.

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