My first featured author today is Tina. She wrote a story about a time things did not go the way she planned. Please notice the strategies she used to organize her paper into paragraphs.
Understanding that she is aiming to publish a story that is only one page long, next time I would encourage Tina to find a few places in the middle of her paper to revise and trim down. I love the beginning and end of her story and would encourage her not to remove any of her introduction, conclusion, or heart.
Please provide positive feedback for our authors.
Comment as "Name/URL"
Students - use your first name only, leave URL blank and press publish.
