Showing posts with label New Place. Show all posts
Showing posts with label New Place. Show all posts

Sunday, April 1, 2012

Featured Author: Hunter (click here)

My first featured author today is Hunter.  He was writing a story about a time in a new place or situation.  As you all know, Texas Rangers stories make a strong connection with me because I can remember my first game as a kid. 

In the future, Hunter will organize his writing into paragraphs and squeeze these short stories into one page.  I also spoke to Hunter about focusing on the main idea of his story.  He used wonderful words to describe his experience, but I encourage Hunter to focus his writing on his most important details and events.





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Sunday, March 25, 2012

Featured Author: Sonata (click here)



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Featured Author: Ryan (click here)

Ryan wrote an exciting story about a time he found himself in a new situation, the scary haunted house!




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Saturday, February 18, 2012

Featured Author: Sandra (click here)

Sandra was asked to write about a time she was in a new place or situation and explain how she reacted.  She worked hard and wrote a great story about the first day at a new school.  The heart of her story is something many us can make a connection to.  Sandra and I discussed dividing her future writing into paragraphs to provide clarity to the reader.  I included her pre-writing because Sandra has a very unique way of using a word web.






Below, Sandra planed her story using a double topic T-chart.  She determined her topic, problem, and heart before she drafted her story.



Sandra is a wonderful artist!  It is no surprise to me that her pre-writing is done in such a creative way.  The middle of the flower is her central idea, and each petal contains ideas that she wants to include in her story.



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Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Featured Author: Lily (click here)

My first featured author is Lily.  She composed a story about a time she was in a new place or situation.




Please comment below and let her know what you think about her story!

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