I love the way how you used show not tell,and i liked how you were excited about making your first friend,i really liked how you wrote that you should never regret someone when you really dont even know them,and i love your handwritting
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!that made me jump right out of my skin.not really but you know what i mean.I loved the heart of your story the most.There is a reason.Because you felt sad for the girl so you made her happy!!!
On a Desktop Computer: Comment as "Name/URL" Students - use your first name only and leave URL blank Press publish.
On a mobile device: Choose "Anonymous" Then put your name at the end of your comment Example: "I love your meaningful conclusion! - Mr.Adams" Press publish.
I love the way how you used show not tell,and i liked how you were excited about making your first friend,i really liked how you wrote that you should never regret someone when you really dont even know them,and i love your handwritting
ReplyDeleteWoW!Alissa your heart was awsome because right there you told me everything about your story.Your handwrititg was very neat.
ReplyDeleteWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!that made me jump right out of my skin.not really but you know what i mean.I loved the heart of your story the most.There is a reason.Because you felt sad for the girl so you made her happy!!!
ReplyDeleteAt first I wasn't very glad about that little girl in her arms.
DeleteAlissa wwwooowwwwwww i love the story
ReplyDeleteI like the heart of the story!
ReplyDeleteI love your introdution
ReplyDelete