Sonata when i looked at the qustion i felt like i was going to my death twice.Once was when i was riding my bike i almost fell off the wall.My bike was pulling me down and my friend did not help me.And the second time was when i hit my stomach on rocks.i could not breathe.I was huffing and puffing but it did not work.Finally i cought my breath and i'm here today.
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i loved the way you said about how scary the omni theater was and i am proud you concurred your fear. :) G2G
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DeleteI like how you tied your conclusion to your interduction it was memorable.
ReplyDeleteSonata when i looked at the qustion i felt like i was going to my death twice.Once was when i was riding my bike i almost fell off the wall.My bike was pulling me down and my friend did not help me.And the second time was when i hit my stomach on rocks.i could not breathe.I was huffing and puffing but it did not work.Finally i cought my breath and i'm here today.
ReplyDeleteI like you said that it would leave a mark, if the screen fell on your face.
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Deletei love your interduction
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