Sunday, March 25, 2012

Featured Author: Salma (click here)



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8 comments:

  1. SALMA i love your story like your title
    and your handwriting is magnificent girl

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  2. i loved the way you used a ? for your introduction.And nice handwriting!

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  3. I love your handwritng and how you started your intro with a question!

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  4. SALMA I LOVE YOUR HANDWRITING AND YOUR PUNCUATION AND THE TITLE

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  5. I LOVE YOUR STORY BECAUSE IT FEELS LIKE I'M IN THERE WITH YOU.I ALSO LIKE YOUR HANDWRITING.YOUR INTRO IS AWESOME BECAUSE YOU STARTED YOUR STORY WITH ASKING A QUESTION.I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!

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  6. I LOVE YOUR HANDWRITING,AND I LOVE HOW YOU USED SHOW NOT TELL,AND HOW YOU WERE SO EXCITED ABOUT MAKING YOUR NEW FRIEND FROM MOVING TO HOUSE TO HOUSE,I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU USED PUNCTUATION,YOUR STORY WAS THE BEST THAT I EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE FROM NOW ON ,AND FOREVER,AND EVER.

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  7. I LIKE HOW YOU SAID THAT AS SOON AS YOU MOVED YOU MADE A FRIEND

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  8. I really like your grammar.And your handwriting!!!!!!!!

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