Saturday, February 18, 2012

Featured Author: Abraham (click here)

All of my students know I am a HUGE Texas Rangers fan!  I made a personal connection to this story because I can relate to the anxiety and frustration Abraham felt. This story is Abraham's experience with his father watching the heartbreaking game 6 of the World Series. 

To improve Abraham's writing in the future, we learned to organize his ideas into paragraphs.






Please comment below and let him know what you think about his story!

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21 comments:

  1. JavierFebruary 18, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    The part were you stated WE WERE ON THE EDGE OF OUR SEATS.SPECTACULAR.ONCHOR.ONCHOR.

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  2. IvanFebruary 18, 2012 at 4:51 PM

    I love your rangers story

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  3. Kristin (Mr. Adams' Wife)February 18, 2012 at 7:20 PM

    I watched that game too, and I remember how frustrating it was! I'm glad you are your dad have something special to share together.

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  4. joelFebruary 18, 2012 at 10:12 PM

    The second I laid my eyes on your story i got sucked in as if their was a vacuum on my head. SO AMAZING!!! Keep up the good work.

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  5. Mrs. KelleyFebruary 18, 2012 at 10:29 PM

    I enjoyed reading your story. Your Ranger story made me feel like I was at the game sitting next to you. I liked the way you described the game.

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  6. sonataFebruary 18, 2012 at 10:34 PM

    Your interduction was awesome!The part when you siad me and my dad drink alot of energy drinks to stay awake was funny.

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  7. LilyFebruary 19, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    Your conclusion was very meaningful, and your passion for baseball really showed in the story.

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  8. sandraFebruary 19, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    I liked your story,it made me feel like if i was in the game with you.

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  9. NatalieFebruary 21, 2012 at 4:06 PM

    I liked your ending loved your story

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  10. salmaFebruary 23, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    I loved the heart of your story!!!!!

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  11. AngelFebruary 23, 2012 at 11:18 AM

    I like when you said let's play ball! I like your spelling.

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  12. MaxFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:00 PM

    Great Interduction,and Fabulous Handwriting!!!!!!!I love How You EXCLAIMED In Your Story Play Ball

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  13. TristanFebruary 24, 2012 at 7:18 PM

    I liked how your story kept me excited, I too remember all those feeling while I watch the game!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  14. abrahamFebruary 27, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    Thank you Mr.Adams for posting my story.Can you post another story.

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  15. tristanFebruary 29, 2012 at 2:40 PM

    I loved your introduction.Keep on the good writing

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  16. hunterMarch 1, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    i love how you shouted LETS PLAY BALL!

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  17. AndreMarch 1, 2012 at 2:58 PM

    very cool dialogue and awesome explaining.

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  18. DianaMarch 2, 2012 at 9:17 AM

    I love your story!!!!!!!!!

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  19. AleeyarMarch 6, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    Your middle was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  20. Adam iMarch 26, 2012 at 11:04 AM

    I loved the part were you yelld what just happen

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  21. tevinMarch 26, 2012 at 11:09 AM

    i love your rangers story

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