I LOVE YOUR STORY BECAUSE IT FEELS LIKE I'M IN THERE WITH YOU.I ALSO LIKE YOUR HANDWRITING.YOUR INTRO IS AWESOME BECAUSE YOU STARTED YOUR STORY WITH ASKING A QUESTION.I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!
I LOVE YOUR HANDWRITING,AND I LOVE HOW YOU USED SHOW NOT TELL,AND HOW YOU WERE SO EXCITED ABOUT MAKING YOUR NEW FRIEND FROM MOVING TO HOUSE TO HOUSE,I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU USED PUNCTUATION,YOUR STORY WAS THE BEST THAT I EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE FROM NOW ON ,AND FOREVER,AND EVER.
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SALMA i love your story like your title
ReplyDeleteand your handwriting is magnificent girl
i loved the way you used a ? for your introduction.And nice handwriting!
ReplyDeleteI love your handwritng and how you started your intro with a question!
ReplyDeleteSALMA I LOVE YOUR HANDWRITING AND YOUR PUNCUATION AND THE TITLE
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOUR STORY BECAUSE IT FEELS LIKE I'M IN THERE WITH YOU.I ALSO LIKE YOUR HANDWRITING.YOUR INTRO IS AWESOME BECAUSE YOU STARTED YOUR STORY WITH ASKING A QUESTION.I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOUR HANDWRITING,AND I LOVE HOW YOU USED SHOW NOT TELL,AND HOW YOU WERE SO EXCITED ABOUT MAKING YOUR NEW FRIEND FROM MOVING TO HOUSE TO HOUSE,I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU USED PUNCTUATION,YOUR STORY WAS THE BEST THAT I EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE FROM NOW ON ,AND FOREVER,AND EVER.
ReplyDeleteI LIKE HOW YOU SAID THAT AS SOON AS YOU MOVED YOU MADE A FRIEND
ReplyDeleteI really like your grammar.And your handwriting!!!!!!!!
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