My first featured author today is Ryan. He wrote a short action-packed story about a fall at River Valley. After reading about his monster crash, I know I will always wear my helmet on a dirt-bike.
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I love your onimonapia's!
ReplyDeleteThank you vary much Sonata.
DeleteYour welcome Ryan!
DeleteYour welcome Ryan!
DeleteI really like your dialouge
ReplyDeletegreat story yan
ReplyDeletegreat story Ryan,but you need to work on your publishing a little!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteRyan your story is nice
ReplyDeletei love your story Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed how you Made the word BAM in bold print to describe how bad the crash was.
ReplyDeleteHey ryan your story was so awesome i love dirt bike riding so great story and keep them coming
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