Sunday, March 25, 2012

Featured Author: Max (click here)

Max is a big fan of skateboarding.  He wrote an explanation about how he made a skate ramp.

 

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8 comments:

  1. ELIMarch 26, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    Your story really brings me in.

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  2. Adam iMarch 26, 2012 at 10:26 AM

    i love the part were you yell lets build a ramp! that was my favorit part

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    1. MAXMarch 26, 2012 at 2:40 PM

      I know i almost screamed my eyes out.

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  3. abrahamMarch 26, 2012 at 2:34 PM

    I loved your ending.

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  4. jennyMarch 29, 2012 at 8:38 AM

    man if I'd had some roller skates I would ride that ramp to try my new roller skates great story by the way >3-

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  5. eliakimMay 31, 2012 at 9:21 AM

    Max I know I was with you but you really brougt the memory back.

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  6. eliakimMay 31, 2012 at 9:22 AM

    max your ending was the best

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  7. Grace C.February 19, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    I like how you wrote "Ohhhh, about 10 pieces. The second time about, Mmmmmmmmmm,Uhhh, 8 pieces." Marvelous word choice. No dead words. :)

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