Sunday, March 25, 2012

Featured Author: Lily (click here)



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16 comments:

  1. alissaMarch 26, 2012 at 9:39 AM

    YOUR story WAS amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. NatalieMarch 26, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    My best seson is summer to beacause its on my birthday.But i reaally like your story aiot!!!!!!!

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  3. APERILMarch 26, 2012 at 9:47 AM

    I LOVE HOW YOU EXPLANED WHY IN AN ENTRASTING WAY

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  4. AlexandraMarch 26, 2012 at 9:50 AM

    I LOVED it!!!I loved when you described summer.

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  5. 10March 26, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    I like how you use exclamation marks!
    it fun in the summer? but not me because it too
    hot.my favorate year is winter!!!!!!.....

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  6. abrahamMarch 26, 2012 at 2:11 PM

    I liked your word choice

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  7. jenniferMarch 26, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    i like your handwriting and word choice.

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  8. sonataMarch 26, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    I like your handwritting and word choice like devastated!

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  9. DiegoMarch 29, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    I like how you explin why you like summer.I also like your handwriting.

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  10. dejaMarch 29, 2012 at 8:51 AM

    i loved your interdouction

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  11. SalmaMarch 29, 2012 at 9:20 AM

    MY FAVORITE SEASON IS SUMMER TO !!!!!!

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  12. TimmiaMarch 30, 2012 at 8:44 AM

    I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH.AND I LOVE HOW YOU USED SHOW NOT NOT TELL ,AND HOW YOU LOVE SUMMER SO MUCH BECAUSE YOU GET TO RELAX,AND SLEEP IN ,AND HAVE FUN WITH YOUR FRIENDS.THAT WAS LIKE MY FAVROTYE PART!!

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  13. TaylorApril 3, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    Wow!lily your story was outstanding.I love how you used
    such neat handwriting.Your story was outstanding.

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  14. DianaApril 5, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    I love your word choice it was magnificent.I agree with you on the favorite things of summer.You used awesome word choice you should really keep on writing.

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  15. Sienna H.February 20, 2013 at 7:14 PM

    I love Summer but not as much as your word choice!!! Keep writing like that your an awesome writer!!! I like your handwriting and everything else there was not one thing wrong in your story!!!

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  16. julieFebruary 21, 2013 at 8:58 AM

    I really loved your description on how you loved summer!It really made me think that summer was my favorite season too!

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