THAT WAS A HALIRAS STORY,I LOVE YOUR HANDWRITTING,AND I LOVED HOW YOU USED SHOW NOT TELL IN YOUR STORY,THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST STORY,AND SCARY STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE.
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you had a great story felicity i loved it
ReplyDeleteTHAT WAS A HALIRAS STORY,I LOVE YOUR HANDWRITTING,AND I LOVED HOW YOU USED SHOW NOT TELL IN YOUR STORY,THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST STORY,AND SCARY STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE.
ReplyDeletei like how you put your period [;
ReplyDeleteI like how you use correct spelling and punctuation
ReplyDeleteI like how you put huge word (:
ReplyDeleteI love your handwriting it is awesome!Your tittle hooked me!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Timmia.
ReplyDeleteI like your intro.And your ending chainsaws and scrams you should turn back and run away
ReplyDeleteI love how you use show not tell
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