i like your story because it feels like I'm in there with you.I love your introduction,your conclusion,the way you use descriptive words,and your spelling words.
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i like the way you put "mrs.anderson ANNOUNCED." before the sentence so we knew she was announcing! WONDERFUL!
ReplyDeleteI lke the your intro and conclusion!
ReplyDeletei like your story because it feels like I'm in there with you.I love your introduction,your conclusion,the way you use descriptive words,and your spelling words.
ReplyDeleteI love your handwriting,and i love how you used show not tell,and especially i like how you used your conclusion.:)
ReplyDeleteI like how you put feelings in your story.
ReplyDeleteI noticed that your story connects to Sondra's story!! Keep writing!!
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