Sunday, March 25, 2012

Featured Author: Taylor (click here)




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6 comments:

  1. i like the way you put "mrs.anderson ANNOUNCED." before the sentence so we knew she was announcing! WONDERFUL!

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  2. I lke the your intro and conclusion!

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  3. i like your story because it feels like I'm in there with you.I love your introduction,your conclusion,the way you use descriptive words,and your spelling words.

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  4. I love your handwriting,and i love how you used show not tell,and especially i like how you used your conclusion.:)

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  5. I like how you put feelings in your story.

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  6. I noticed that your story connects to Sondra's story!! Keep writing!!

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